Just came across a great blog entry about telling, not showing, when writing fiction -- a major no-no! We are told not to tell but to show with screewriting. Well, approach your fiction in the same manner. In fact, even the words you use can be "telling" words:
If your fiction is rife wtih those words, find a more unique way to describe what the character is experiencing. (I need to take this advice myself!) Read the rest of Donna K. Weaver's post, from her blog, Weaving a Tale or Two.
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